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	<title>Comments on: Authors tighten it up</title>
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		<title>By: Juniper Bell</title>
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		<dc:creator>Juniper Bell</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 18 Dec 2009 23:53:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Dee, I had no idea you were a proofreader! Cool. I absolutely agree with your comments. My first book was contracted after I ruthlessly went over my first chapter, fixed places where it dragged and hacked out all the extra words. Self-editing is so important!! And so painful. But so worth it. Thanks for the post!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Dee, I had no idea you were a proofreader! Cool. I absolutely agree with your comments. My first book was contracted after I ruthlessly went over my first chapter, fixed places where it dragged and hacked out all the extra words. Self-editing is so important!! And so painful. But so worth it. Thanks for the post!</p>
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		<title>By: Hailey Edwards</title>
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		<dc:creator>Hailey Edwards</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 18 Dec 2009 23:40:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I did not know you did double duty as a LSB proofer. Very cool.

Since my process is chaos and, like you mentioned, I never know where my story is headed, I always just push through the beginning chapters.

When everything is said and done, I think my very first chapters turn out much more interesting and detailed than the others (because I do heavy handed revisions once I wrap up the ending).

Finding the balance is my new goal. lol

Great post, Dee, and very good points.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I did not know you did double duty as a LSB proofer. Very cool.</p>
<p>Since my process is chaos and, like you mentioned, I never know where my story is headed, I always just push through the beginning chapters.</p>
<p>When everything is said and done, I think my very first chapters turn out much more interesting and detailed than the others (because I do heavy handed revisions once I wrap up the ending).</p>
<p>Finding the balance is my new goal. lol</p>
<p>Great post, Dee, and very good points.</p>
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